Awesome Writing by Abigail

The Race

It felt like I was at the cross country when I ran around the school. I beat Camryn and I beat the fast runners. I came fourth – lucky me. I felt like a champion! It felt like it wasn’t a dream, it was a real race – a champion race and I came first. Then we had another race and this time I came fourth. I was puffing and my heart was beating like a racing car. I was proud of myself like I had never been before.