Thursday, June 3, 2010

DyLan M - What a clever writer!

Congratulations Dylan. It's great to see you achieve your card 3 writing goals. Well Done!

Caitlin - What a super writer!

Congratulations to Caitlin who has achieved her Card 4 writing goals and earned herself a crunchie bar. Well Done!

Brooke's Poem - There was an old woman

Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Tuesday, June 1, 2010

The huge flood - Written by Camryn


There were big floods. The Taieri river was rising up quickly and a road had been flooded. Lots
of paddocks have been flooded. My farm has been flooded so now my cows are at the run-off. Leos bed-room is flooded and Leo has to sleep in Nathans bed-room.
Camryn

The big flood - Written by Ben


There was a flood in the weekend at my Grandma's paddock. It flooded the whole paddock. There were sticks in it . I threw a stick in the paddock and I went to the Taieri river. The water went on the road .
Ben.